Spot the Mistakes

I was given this flyer not too long ago. There are some mistakes. Can you spot the mistakes? No prizes for guessing the right answers, sorry 😛 Using English incorrectly in advertisements may not be appealing to customers. It shows the lack of professionalism.

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Posted on December 12, 2009, in Jottings. Bookmark the permalink. 4 Comments.

  1. *Newly imported High-end equipment
    *Free Trial on 16, 17 & 18 Nov 2009

    🙂

    • Hi Bananaz,

      Yes, you’re right. You’ve spotted two mistakes. However, there are still mistakes elsewhere 🙂
      Just a thought, perhaps it’s better to say: Newly imported state-of-the-art equipment.

  2. Wow state-of-the-art I like it. What about “Classes”, “Slimming” & “Bodybuilding” is one word [sorry gotta admit for this one I googled]? Have a splendid weekend.

    • Yup, you’ve got all that correct, Bananaz. Hmm, somehow you’re the only one who responded; I guess you’re faster than the other visitors 😀 Enjoy the new week!

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